Microfiction two sentence stories: Love at First Sight

I can't stop thinking about you. All it took was one look.



HEART <3



Note: I honestly just felt like doing something a little romantic. I was inspired just by how all it takes is one look to be interested in someone and want to know them further. Microfictions are almost like writing short poems. That's what it felt like to me, at least. I hope my first one wasn't too terrible!

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  1. WilkeADubbMarch 2, 2020 at 10:22 AM

    Hey Emily!

    I was stopping by to thank you for your interest and feedback on my storybook. I'm glad that you enjoyed my Origin story! I have some major revisions to go through as it was a pretty rough draft, so stop back by later this week to see how it changed. I am so excited to write the Persephone story! I have so many ideas so I think it will be difficult to choose exactly what I want to do. Anyway, thanks again for your insight. I came to this microfiction because I always enjoy seeing how creative people can be with storytelling in so few words. This is the first romance theme I've seen. It was a very cute story! There's so much left to the reader to create and imagine, which is something I love about microfictions. Great job!

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